Oh... i ate them.. hold on...Saturday, July 30, 2011
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O.o wooow. i got a comment... *tries not to act like a 5 year old* i got a comment... yay!! wow... have not updated in a looong time... anyway, summer vacation!! WHOO!! we go back to school in two weeks. :P anyway, I HAVE A NEW FANFICTION!!!!!! GO TO FANFICTION, SERCH TWIJAZLUVER, READ AND REVEW!!!! WHOOO!!! SUGAARHIGHS AARE AWESOME!!!! I JUST ATE BAKED BREAD WITH BUTTER AND SUGAR!! SUGAR TOOOOOASSSS(XD)TTTTTT!! WANNA MAKE IT? INSTRUCTIOBNS:
GRAB BREAD. SMEAR ON BUTTER. SPRINKLE ALOT OF SUGAR ON TOP. TOAST/PUT IN THE OVEN. LET COOL. EAAT TEH SUGAREYYYY GOOOOOODDDDDNNNNEEEESSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! FINISHED PRODUCT WILL LOOK LIKE TIHS:
Oh... i ate them.. hold on...o, theres another pic. yum.... bye!
Oh... i ate them.. hold on...
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I may have to try that recipe out! :)
ReplyDeleteYou just made an Alot up there.... *giggles madly*
ReplyDeleteGotta' say, it looks like your blog has potential -- you have a lot of interesting stories, and ideas -- like Sugar-Bread. Or whatever you call it.
I've got a few suggestions, but I don't mean them to be rude, so don't please don't take offense--
Spellcheck. For a lot of people, spelling and grammar are both really dull things that seem totally unnecessary, but they really help to make the reading experience more enjoyable. Proper capitalizations, proper spelling, proper grammar, all that good crap makes for a really easy-to-read and fun-to-read blog post. Sugary doesn't have an e in it. For some reason reading "Sugarey" angered me more than it should. *Deranged Grammar Freak* My apologies.
Stay on topic. Now, I don't necessarily mean that one post has to be ALL one topic, but if you just saved a few paragraphs for each topic, and made the transitions not quite so sudden and mid-sentence, it would be a lot nicer to read, and be a little less -- "Wait, what? Comment? Toast? Vacations? WHAAAAAAT? CONFUSION!" and involve several re-readings.
Maybe making the blog posts just a liiiittle longer would help to captivate interest, but only if you really want to/have the time.
Also, the shameless advertisement for your fanfiction might not be the best idea...
But also, one big idea, mostly relating to your last post -- Don't apologize!!!! If you're constantly apologizing for things you didn't even necessarily do wrong, you'll come off as someone really seeking pity. Just go for it and have fun with the blog -- which may mean totally disregarding all of my suggestions, if that's what you'd rather do. Remember, this is YOUR blog, make it for YOU! When you end up just doing it for yourself, you'll end up making it more fun for everyone else to read as well!!
~The Probably Mildly Hypocritical And Definitely Terribly Wordy ELI.